Friday, October 31, 2014

Why do these types of motivational speeches only seem to come before football games?


In “Georgia Tech Football: Time to Turn the Yellow Jackets Loose!”  Derrick Moore delivered a short but effective motivational speech. It so happens to be that motivational speeches delivered with such enthusiasm and energy tend to only happen before football games because football coaches know that what they say to their players prior to the running, sweating and intense action on the field may very well determine the quality at which the players will strive to win. When delivering a speech like Moore’s, coaches consider the nerves, emotions and states of mind of their players.

It is well known that before a major event is when peoples nerves start to set in. Even though one has been working forever in preparation for that big event there is no way to avoid nervousness. It is just part of the human nature. Unless we learn to project it in the right direction, it often tends to make us have second thoughts and sometimes hinders us from performing to our full potential. Moore understands that. He knows that what he says to his players before the game and not after is what really matters. He knows that his ability to settle the nerves and raise the competitive urge in the hearts and minds of his players will determine how they approach the game and in turn, how they finish it.

            Moore appeals to his players emotions by emphasizing how important family is. “There’s nothing like family. At the end of the day, when sun sets, that’s all you have. Ultimately, that’s all you need.” Family is there through the thick and thin, always has ones back and is supporting no matter what-at least that’s what they say. Moore therefore implies that when his boys go out on the field that night, they are going to do their best. Not to impress him, the crowd or anybody else who doesn’t matter. They are going to do their best for their brothers on the team. For that is their family and if your family has your back, you better have theirs too.

Moore also uses the rhetorical style of language to his advantage. “A bunch of brothers bleed and sweat together, fought through summer, all the lifting and running, for moments like these…” He uses words like ‘brothers’, ‘bleed’, ‘fought’, ‘together’ to show the players that what they went through in the summer was a team effort and what they are going to do on the field is a team effort. And for that reason, they are not going to win that game for anyone but each other. Those same words hold strong connotations too. That causes a rise of emotion in the players and gets their blood pumping, ready for what is to come on the field.
In conclusion, the overall tone of this speech is very passionate. Moore clearly knows that calming the nerves, rousing the emotions and positively affecting the states of mind of his players will do the trick that will lead them to playing a great game. These kind of motivational speeches only seem to come before football games because if given to other people-young/old- in other situations in the same manner, the hospitals would probably be in business because of all the people taken there due to high blood pressure

The Proper Place for Sports Rhetorical Analysis


                The speaker is Theodore Roosevelt. The occasion is sports during the early 1900s.  The audience is his son, Ted Roosevelt. The purpose is to tell his son the importance of knowing when to play sports and when not to play sports. The subject is the way sports can affect Ted and he has a jolly tone and a willing to let Ted do what he wants. In this letter, Theodore writes to his son regarding the interest his son has for playing football. Not only is he encouraging towards it but also offers some of his own thoughts and opinions towards the topic through rhetorical strategies like allusion, analogy and anaphora.

Roosevelt uses allusion in his letter to coax his son not to let sports take over his duties. He tells his son, Ted, that he is very proud of him making the team although he is worried for Ted’s safety. He doesn’t want to distress his son by telling him this, but he must. He uses Pliny to show how sports can affect someone in a negative way. He uses the example of sports distracting the Greeks from protecting themselves as a lesson of what it could do to Ted. Ted, like the Greeks, can become sidetracked and absorbed in football and forget the responsibility of doing well in school. He is concerned that Ted won’t be able to make the right choice of keeping himself from being distracted like the Greeks were.

While writing to his son, Roosevelt is trying to explain that being good at sports is a good thing. In an attempt to make his assertion simpler and easier to grasp, Roosevelt uses a metaphor. In this metaphor he compares “athletic proficiency” to “a good servant”. This metaphor indicates that being good at sports is good because it can help with nearly anything just like a good servant. He could also be inferring that by being good at sports, he is more inclined at other basic physical activities, just like a servant is good at nearly any job related to helping his master. This metaphor, granting it not being a major aspect in his letter, did however send a very meaningful message to Roosevelt’s son.

Roosevelt uses anaphora to accent the fact that his son should not put his body in harms way. When writing to his son, Ted, he gives him the pros and cons of playing football at Harvard. “I am delighted to have you play football. I believe in rough, manly sports. But I do not believe in them if they degenerate into the sole end of any one’s existence. I don’t want you to sacrifice standing well in your studies to any over-athleticism; and I need not tell you that character counts for a great deal more than either intellect or body in winning success in life.” Here Roosevelt uses anaphora to show his son he does not want him to injure himself. So he stresses the fact that there is more to being a good person than being smart or athletic…one must have character. Theodore Roosevelt uses anaphora in his letter to set Ted straight by putting emphasis on his ideas and giving him a look into how he became such a great man.

In conclusion, in this letter, Theodore writes to his son about his interest for playing football. Not only is he willing to keep an open mind towards it but also offers some of his own thoughts and opinions on the topic at hand through rhetorical strategies like allusion, analogy and anaphora. After reading this Ted Roosevelt definitely knew what the proper place for sports was.





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